Precious McKenzie

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W.A.L.T : edit my precious McKenzie work independently to identify errors and get my work ready for publishing.

Reflection I was able to edit my precious McKenzie work and find the words that had red lines under them and I went and corrected my spelling mistakes.

Next time I will make sure I had used capital letters in the right places eg. names, places, beginning of sentences.

Speeches 2017

                                                         W.A.L.T: deliberately choose words to create an effect on the audience

I was able to choose persuasive words in my speech like I think and persuasive.
Next time i can make my speech make more sense and make more perseverance words that are highlighted.

Usain Bolt

W.A.L.T : locate and evaluate information about Usain bolt, on the internet.

I was able to write down some facts because of the internet.

My Kennings Poem

W.A.L.T:distinguish between relevant and irrelevant ideas for my kennings poem.

I was able to wright relevant idea about myself.

Next time I am.

Camp Merc Acrostic

W.A.L.T : edit and revise my writing for clarity and impact in response to feedback.

Reflection
I was abbe to change some spelling mistakes because Jordan told me to.
Next time I am going to change my spelling mistakes instead of Jordan telling me to like
I will ask for help,I will look for squiggle red lines.

45 letter sounds

W.A.L.T : Identify  letter sounds
The 45 letter sounds helped me with my spelling.
Next time I am going to find words that have the sound but don't have the letters.

All about me

Walt : use advanced punctuation

We have learning how to use bullet points correctly in my 10 Things About Me slideshow.  I learnt you need to :

• Place the bullet point in the margin.
• Use a capital letter after the bullet point.
• If you have written a sentence, end it with a punctuation eg.
•  full stop.
• Bullet points are used to create lists.
• Find the bullet points icon on the right hand side at top of the tool bar called bullet lists.

Next time I will try and use bullet points in more of writing.

Can you guess which of my information is true and which is a lie ?

Welcome Post

MY Reflection
This year some of my goals are.

• Making it into the swimming team.
• get to 100 ticks.
• be a house caption.
• Make new friends.

Statement sentence

Metaphors

Spelling Rule 1[b] plurals

My Interview

kung fu lesson

On Monday last Monday we did kung fu lessons with our teacher called JO-JO. First we did the peace to start the lesson. with is flatten your hand then with your right hand do a fist and put them together. Then with your left foot you take a step to the left and with your hands you close them and put them on your rib cages. 3rd step is to punch straight has hard has you can and well your punching say oh.4th step is a high kick in the air has hard has you can go the when the kick goes down you take a step ford and bring your right foot up then with your left foot and kik. Then take a step back and bend and take your hands straight and open your hands like you're going to marry somebody then take a step to the left and bend down and put your hands like a circle and that's how you do kung fu. It was awesome then JO-JO and Mrs U picked the finals and they picked oliva, nadia, Kate, Addison, Caitlin, Joshua, Keshia and Ashra and I thought Nadia and Kate and Joshua were the best but i still think the others did good but Olivia was funny cause she did the circle a little bit weird but she still did good. I felt happy because i had fun.

The Appealing Apple

my fairy tale

Cinderella,  bell and 3 wolfs.

by Emma N

once upon time the princess was called  bell and lived in a cottage with 3 little wolves who was bell friends and when they had dinner somehow we heard a noise. then a strange person came and knocked on the door.the first wolfs answered.When he opened the door a princess said hi there can i live with you.The little pig answered and said yes you may my princess. As soon as snow white came and had a look who it was.She was so excited cause it was Cinderella.When they were little they were very good friends.

Then it was bedtime for the little 3 wolfs and when they were in bed .bell and Cinderella  was watching a movie for not really long.then went to bed.In the morning they had breakfast and talked then they were invited to a boll cause the prince had to choose a princess and then become king and queen.Then Cinderella said well let’s get changed.Oh i know what i could were i will were a blue and sparkle dress said bell .Then they went to up steers.oh i don’t know what I'm going to were oh Cinderella why don’t we go bye one.how lovely this is awesome said bell.What a dream said Cinderella so did the 3 wolfs.Then we saw the prince oh he’s so handsome.oh bell i think he’ll choose you said bell then the prince came and said to Cinderella. then he said would you have a dance said the prince.Share said bell then he said i won’t to show you something my love then they got married and lived happily ever after.

             THE END!!!!!!!!
My Reflation 
we have be in learning to write a story and mix the charters up.
have i found this hard because i didn't know what charters i should mix up.
my next step is to not just sit there and think I should get up and ask someone for some charters.

My fairy tale idea

Fairy tale: The 3 mouse and the evil one

Characters: Alex, JP and Harry

Orientation: Once upon a time there was 4 mice called harry Alex JP. harry  is the evil one. one day harry said lets go for a walk so they did the he killed the 3 other mouse

Setting: Walking in the forest to the volcano

Problems:The 3 other brothers fall for a trick and the evil brother kills the other brothers for 1 day

Solution: The three mouse hunt the evil one

Conclusion: comes as ghosts

we have being learning to write a fairy tale story by mixing the characters up.
i found it tricky because I had to do all the work cause Charlotte wasn't really helping me since we were working together.
my next step is to try a little harder and ask someone els.

my fairy tale

term 4 week 4

                                    rugby world cup and my weekend

On Sunday me and Katie had to wake up at 5 o'clock in the morning but we wake up at 6 o'clock but we did watch it for 2 hours and Dane carter got the drop and i was awesome and me and Katie were blocking our ears because of my dad cheering for the all blacks and when it finished one of the Aussie people were crying and closing his eyes even throw they said on twitter that they will win but they lost BO ho Aussies they suck. 

Then we had to get changed and have a shower then we didn't won't to watch the rest instead we played with Katie with the my rugby ball doing passes on the Field but when we got there my cousin and my brother Zach was flowing us so we moved and they still flowing us so we had to play touch well me and my cousin wonted to play tackle but not Katie and Zach cause they wonted to play touch so we did then played tackle.

Then we went to church and went up steers and played games then we drooped of Katie and played for a little bit when our mums were talking they took ages and ages then it was time to go then i had dinner and went to bed.

Term 4 week 3

                                              MY WEEKEND

On Saturday i went to the beach for lunch and when we went there we didn't know that the markets were on so we got ice cream and candy floss but it was a small one.Then i went on the play ground
and i had to wait for the swings well i only had to wait for 5 minutes the i could go on them but my brother didn't he had to wait for ages so i gave him my tern because i did have a long tern.After that we went home and played on the tablet.

When we went on the tablet i played Movie Star Planet for about 1 hour because i had no idea what to play.Then i had dinner and desert Then we watched a movie then i went to bed and when i woke up we went to Mac Donald's for break fast and had ban cakes with serape on top and a drink to go with it.After that i wen to the pools and i was so lucky that after we went for a swim we got a ice cream with a flake in it.

Then we went to my Nana's house for a sleep over And when i first went their i saw Nana and she gave me big hugs and then we played uno and it was 2 out of 2 a match so we had a play again and pa ma she won! then we had dinner and went to bed.

Term 4 week 2

 In the morning on Sunday I went to a restaurant for breakfast at 7:30 and when I first went in I was a bit scared because it was fulled with my Dad work friends and I had no idea who they ware but a few min later i was fine to know them.But when it was time for breakfast I got toast, butter, fruit and Bacon and sat back down and go on the tablet because i was a bit board when they ware watching the world cup.

After half hour we went to church because we ware having a shared lunch and we brought donuts, bread and chips.I got bread, coke and chips so yum yummy.  Then we went home and packed my staff for Katie's house then mum dropped me off to Katie's and when i first  went there we went on the computer then  we went to jump for two hours and got drinks.After that we went home so we could have a spa for an hour and a half.

The we had chicken and rice for dinner and for desert we had ice cream with m&m.Then i went to bed and watched a movie in bed in till we ware asleep.Next in the morning Katie and I got in our togs and went to the pools for about an hour in a half.Then we wen home and went on the computer and went on MSP which is Movie Star Planet t it was awesome for my first time.

Then I went home at 5 and as soon as i went home i went on the tablet and played Movie Star Planet because it was so fun and my account was VIP coming throw because i am a VIP and i look so SO cool:) then i went to night church, when i first went there i saw this big as clown just standing their in my face then we went up stairs and played games and watched movies then we went down stairs and had dinner then went home.


The down stairs ware the adults praying and worshiping but up stairs we have fun