My fairy tale idea

Fairy tale: The 3 mouse and the evil one

Characters: Alex, JP and Harry

Orientation: Once upon a time there was 4 mice called harry Alex JP. harry  is the evil one. one day harry said lets go for a walk so they did the he killed the 3 other mouse

Setting: Walking in the forest to the volcano

Problems:The 3 other brothers fall for a trick and the evil brother kills the other brothers for 1 day

Solution: The three mouse hunt the evil one

Conclusion: comes as ghosts

we have being learning to write a fairy tale story by mixing the characters up.
i found it tricky because I had to do all the work cause Charlotte wasn't really helping me since we were working together.
my next step is to try a little harder and ask someone els.