my fairy tale

Cinderella,  bell and 3 wolfs.

by Emma N

once upon time the princess was called  bell and lived in a cottage with 3 little wolves who was bell friends and when they had dinner somehow we heard a noise. then a strange person came and knocked on the door.the first wolfs answered.When he opened the door a princess said hi there can i live with you.The little pig answered and said yes you may my princess. As soon as snow white came and had a look who it was.She was so excited cause it was Cinderella.When they were little they were very good friends.

Then it was bedtime for the little 3 wolfs and when they were in bed .bell and Cinderella  was watching a movie for not really long.then went to bed.In the morning they had breakfast and talked then they were invited to a boll cause the prince had to choose a princess and then become king and queen.Then Cinderella said well let’s get changed.Oh i know what i could were i will were a blue and sparkle dress said bell .Then they went to up steers.oh i don’t know what I'm going to were oh Cinderella why don’t we go bye one.how lovely this is awesome said bell.What a dream said Cinderella so did the 3 wolfs.Then we saw the prince oh he’s so handsome.oh bell i think he’ll choose you said bell then the prince came and said to Cinderella. then he said would you have a dance said the prince.Share said bell then he said i won’t to show you something my love then they got married and lived happily ever after.

             THE END!!!!!!!!
My Reflation 
we have be in learning to write a story and mix the charters up.
have i found this hard because i didn't know what charters i should mix up.
my next step is to not just sit there and think I should get up and ask someone for some charters.